I can say that I had a good semester, even thou I worked very hard studyng. I finished very tired. I had too much to do. We hardly had time to study correctly the diferent topics and assignatures. But, we learnd a lot of things, like a computer program very usefull for our carrere.
Apart of studyng, I was in class of "flamenco". I loved it. It made me (and it makes me now, because I am still on clasess) very happy, because it makes me concentrate in something very different for a while. And makes me revitalice my body a lot.
Also I'm part of an educational proyect named "La Escuelita". It's a very interesting proyect because it propose a diferent way to understand the education in the society. I'm very happy to participate.
In the meddle of the semester I made a trip to Europe along three weeks. It was a wonderful travel whith my family. We went to France to see my brother, and I also had the oportunity to see some friends. I loved France, Paris was amazing, but the place I liked the most was the countryside. We visited "Alsacia", a region very close to Germany. The towns where very beautiful, whit a lot of colors and nature. There where middle age castels and very old churchs. The only bad thing was to cacht up the studyes. It was very hard.
It was a good semester. Full of good moments and also full of challenges.
Bye!!
Sofi-Freckles.
Transantiago
Hace 15 años
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ResponderEliminarExcellent job, Sofía, and very interesting.
ResponderEliminarI´ll give you feedback in class, but in the meantime, edit your nearest partner´s post and see if you can suggest any comments.
You get 2 points.
Paula
Very good, a well built and precise argument.
ResponderEliminarI like your style and the way you tell things.
Anyway I found some mistakes.
For exemple the gerund of the verb study is studying and not studyng; and you wrote the word studies with a "y" instead of an "i". The word "thou" lacks of "gh" at the end of it. You wrote twice the word project with a "y" instead of a "j". The word revitalize it's written with a "z" not a "c". You mistaked once in wrtiting the word middle with an "e" instead of the first "i". The word colour has an "u" before the second "o". The verb "to be" conjugated in the second person of the present tense is "were" and not "where". When you write the verb catch don't forget to put the "t" before the "ch". Don't forget in writing with without an "h" after "w". And don't forget to put "s" at the end of a verb in the present tense when it's in front of "it".